Hello!
Here we are, the students of Team B:
Baishev Kirill
Degtyareva Christina
Golovina Irina
Tretyakov Kirill
We have the same interests, but study different second languages - Japanese, French, German. We are active, friendly, responsable, always smiling, funny, with great sence of humour.
Kirill Baishev likes training, and make his muscles big, Irina likes reading and studying in University, Christina loves singing and dancing and writing verses for her own songs, Kirill Tretyakov likes listening to Metal, playing guitar and translating texts of favourite bands.
Here we will try to do our best. and present our knowledge in English.
Wish you good luck
Paragraph Writing "USA Presidential Campaign" from the document "Debate Transcript" Deadline Sunday October 19, 2008 midnight Yakutsk time
Team Roles:
Kirill B., starter for the first key sentences in the paragraph (2-3 sentences) for introductory part.
Irina, the key paragraph 1 writing (Barack Obama)
Christina, the key paragraph 2 writing (John McCain)
Kirill T., the wrapper, writing a conclusion consisting of 2-3 sentences according to the introductory part
The tax rates are too high in the USA, so taxation is one of the "hot" and important questions, which are under consideration of two Candidates. Both suggest their own resolutions of the problem.
Senator Obama proposes "to grow the economy from the bottom up". He means a tax cut for 95% of working families. Also, he wants to stop supporting of corporations that work overseas.
Senator Mccain wants to keep taxes low, particulary the USA business pays, which are considered as the highest in the world (30%). Besides, he wants people "to have a $5000 refundable cuts to purchase their own health care".
There is a serious struggle between them, both hold strong positions. Results of these President Elections will influence the whole world.
Comments (4)
Burka_ataman@mail.ru said
at 9:58 pm on Oct 5, 2008
Hello!
Larissa Olesova said
at 8:42 pm on Oct 12, 2008
Hi, team B but where is the fifth member in your group? I can't see in the photo. Larissa
Larissa Olesova said
at 4:58 pm on Oct 19, 2008
Hi, group B. It is interesting that you chose tax problems for this debate. Please, rewrite the introductory part by including the key issues for two candidates as a whole. Please, keep two sentences for each candidates and rewrite the conclusion by restating the general tax problem and how each of them treats it. Please, check your grammar. Do not use We - you should refer to 3rd singular so far. Do not use questions for your conclusion. State the arguments from the document. Please, revise and submit a new updated paragraph by Sunday October 25 by midnight Yakutsk time.
Larissa Olesova said
at 10:14 am on Oct 26, 2008
Hi, team B,
Could you write the paragraph by following the comments? Larissa
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